Eyes

So I woke up today and my eyes felt like they were on fire... This sudden change to dry weather is killing them, lol. Not to mention the skin around them in very dry, and stings when I put cream on them to try and keep them moisturized... My contacts are also getting harder to wear longer, too. And by the evening, it gets harder for my eyes to focus.

The good news is I have completed my boards! I finished them on Monday. I also have already chosen which scenes to cut incase I run out of time. I'm also almost finished with my character designs and turn arounds as well. My scanner doesn't want to though, it seems so I'll post them as soon as I can. I'm going to try and get the (luckily few) backgrounds completed on Friday as well. So, it's finally coming along. =)

Now back to sleep...

Storyboards

Currently working on drawing storyboards. I'll post them as soon as I scan and complete them.

Script

Okay, here's the script. I think I did this right. Let me clarify, that this isn't a shot list. I combined some of the actions, but this is how I would break it up if it were storyboards. Some of the lengthier ones would probably end up being two separate boards all together, but still in the same shot. If that makes any sense. Anyway... I'm sure some of these could be condensed, and I'm already picking out shots that I can toss aside if I run out of time. So, this is the final product. Now I just have to board it, give turn arounds for the characters and stuff, and make the backgrounds... These next three weeks are going to get rough... >.< Also I kept having problems posting the script in it's tabled format... It's like that in the word document, but I couldn't get it like that one here.

Sound Effect	Action
Some kind of soft music playing in the background	Titles Screen
	Zoom in on Mermaid, laying on a rock
	MS of Mermaid looking up to the left, then down to the right
	Mermaid moves her hand out to boredly inspect her nails
	C/U of Mermaid, sighing heavily and resting her chin back in her hand. Her eyes look down.
	C/U of a Flower at the base of the rock.
	Cut back to the Mermaid, who is now excited at having noticed the flower.
Flower being picked	C/U of Flower as Mermaid reaches down and picks it.
	C/U of the Flower, eyes appearing on its face.
	Flower’s eyes widen in terror as he’s being lifted up by the mermaid.
	Cut back to the Mermaid, who now sitting atop the rock
	Mermaid looks at the pretty Flower
	C/U of Flower, looking nervous
	Mermaid reaches for a petal
	POV of flower. Mermaid’s giant hand, slowing reaching forward.
Yelling	Flower screams and flails
	Mermaid plucks out the petal, tossing it aside
	Mermaid reaches for another petal
	C/U of Flower, two petals together, praying
	Flower opens its eyes just as Mermaid picks out another petal
Yelling	Flower cries out and flails again
	Mermaid tosses that petal aside and reaches for another.
	Flower cries as she picks the third petal.
	Flower’s eyes narrow in anger.
Roar	Cut back to the Mermaid, tossing and reaching for another petal when a loud roar is heard
	Mermaid looks at the Flower, which begins to grow
	Flower becomes a giant, menacing monster
	Mermaid stares in horror
Roar	Flower roars, blowing back Mermaid’s hair.
Snarling	C/U of Flower monster looming closer
Snarling	C/U of shadow passing over Mermaid, who’s cowering in terror
Growling, Screaming	Flower monster’s jaws open wide, Mermaid screams
	Cut to Flower monster with Mermaid’s tail sticking out of its mouth
Slurping noise	Flower monster sucks in the tail
Belch	Flower monster belches out seashell bra

Tentative Storyboards

I also sketched out some tentative storyboards. I'm not sure if I going to keep this exact thing... I'm sure things will change once I start animating them. They always do. Anyway, here's what I have so far. Any comments? Or suggestions for that matter... Anything is welcome, because I'm still trying to work it all out myself here.

Character Concepts

Okay, so I've spent some time trying to come up with some character designs... I don't have any turn arounds yet, however... I think I might do that after the boards... Which seems backwards, but oh well.

Oh yeah, and before you say anything, YES I know her hair looks like Ariel's. Why? I made a character a while back and randomly sketched her hair and it came out like Ariel's, except more rounded... So I kept it. Sooooooo... I decided to use it again. It won't be red, however. Maybe blonde or black. I could sweep it the other way, but this works better with the natural direction I draw in. Also... I figured, why not? Make it a parody if you really want to think about it that way. *shrug*

I felt this first one was waaaaaaaaay too complicated...

So I tried sketching some more...
I particularly liked the one on this page up in the right hand corner.
Tried making a full body one with the face and everything.

Thinking of posing more in terms of the scene in the animation...
Tried breaking it up into simple shapes and then seeing if that could be easily duplicated...
Unfortunately... I realized there was a slight similarity to Skydoll... Completely unintentional since I've only seen a few pictures...
Tried a turn around... I might go ahead and use this one, actually... Put it on non-lined paper, of course, and refine it.

So yeah... Any suggestions or ideas? Critiques?

Mermaid Story

Okay, so I think I'm going to stick with the lame mermaid story, because that's the best I can come up with for now. It's easy enough to write out, I just need to make the character designs simple and I should be fine. I hope... I'm hoping I can keep it to 30 to 40 seconds long. I plan on making a schedule up as soon as possible so I can get this all figured out. I'm not sure how well I'll stick to it, though... Any schedule I've ever made, I've never stuck to... Nor am I really good at estimating about how long it'll take to do something, because you can never factor in how many mistakes or screws up you're going to make or that're going to happen. Anyway, I probably won't really be able to get started until this weekend. I'm going to try to get my script up as soon as possible, since that shouldn't be too difficult to type up.

For some reason getting up at 8 am is really hard this year... School is really hard in general to get motivated for. I'm not really sure why... Like, by now, I would have already had my schedule lined up for next quarter, since I register tomorrow, but I don't... Maybe it's because "senioritis" didn't hit me in high school so it decides to get me when I really matters. Go figure. Well, regardless, I've really got to get in gear. These next couple weeks are going to be fairly rough once it gets started. It was funny, yesterday, in concept when he told us in the next three weeks we had to have full character turn arounds, complete layout designs, color choices, etc. everyone's eyes were wide and they were like, "Holy crap..." and I'm sitting there thinking... Yeah, it's going to suck, but I've been through worse so I know I can get through it just fine. I've had to have twice as much as that done in 3 weeks, so I know it can be done. Just need to keep that attitude and I should be fine. =)

Story Concept (Premise)

Okay, so here's my attempt at a story on the fly. It's just one idea for now.

A Mermaid is sitting on a rock under the sea. She notices a pretty undersea flower, and being in a happy mood, she picks it. The flower immediately wakes up and looks slightly annoyed at the mermaid having picked him/woken him up. Humming to herself nonchalantly, the mermaid starts picking petals off one by one. The flower starts to get angry. Suddenly the flower grows huge and menacing, roars at the mermaid, and eats her in one gulp. Bubbles float around and then the flower burps out the mermaid's seashell bra and grins sheepishly. The End.


I think it'd be kind of fun to do. I don't know where it came from, but that was conceived in about 5 minutes, lol. Not bad for me.